Greetings community, this is my participation.
By the way, in it I followed the recommendation of @theinkwell, and I passed the text through an English proofreader, so that it becomes easier to read, if you can tell me if it reads better, I will be grateful.
https://peakd.com/hive-170798/@osomar357/creative-nonfiction-from-depression-to-harmony-enesp
These are the guys I supported: @lightpen, @popurri, @samiwrites