THE INKWELL POETRY CHALLENGE| My Mirage

in The Ink Well5 years ago

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Broken like a mist

My mirage they see

Judge for what they think

For my mirage is an epitome of beautify

They call me selfish

But they don't know

My silent cry and pain

Who will save me?

No one I know of

But maybe I should try

And be my own savior

But how can I?

When my heart is a thorn

Between saving me

And helping them that criticize me.


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Interesting poem. That the speaker assumes the awareness of pain and its loss is a very significant feature. Saludos, @phabi.