Hello, my name is Jesus and I want to tell you how I achieved my financial success. It all started 10 years ago, when I met a woman who for me at that time was the most beautiful woman I could have ever met.
I was doing some shopping for the house, that day I bought cleaning products and also bought food, when I was going to pay, I felt like eating apple, so I started to walk to the fruit area to take some, after that I go to cancel the total of everything I will take and that's when I bumped into her, I apologized, but our eyes met for about 3 minutes, she just smiled and I reacted the same way just smiled if either of us said a few words.
After that day, fate began to put each piece in its place, I began to coincide in several places with her, that day I looked like a child when he falls in love, it's amazing how a person can fall in love at first sight, the most tremendous thing is that I did not believe in love at first sight and look what happened to me.
One day a friend invited me to his wife's party, I did not think about going, but at the end of the afternoon I decided to go to the party, I started to walk down the stairs of the building where I live, but when I was walking down the stairs my mind began to dream about the beautiful woman that I had found in different places, already driving to my friend's house, I passed by a liquor store to buy a bottle of wine, then I passed by a jewelry store and bought the gift for my friend's wife. I arrived at my friend's house, and when I knocked on the door, knock, knock, knock! Who opens the door, it turns out to be the woman I bumped into that day and with whom I met in many places. When she sees me she says: "Hello, you're following me", but with an attractive smile on her angelic face, the truth is that I did not expect it, surprised, and I answer: "Hello, I'm a friend of Carlos and Monica, you know lately we are meeting a lot". She smiles and lets me in, but she takes me to where Carlos and Monica are, while we were walking I looked at her with illusion, When I got to where they were, Carlos told me: "You already met Monica's sister", I put a surprised face that everyone noticed and smiled, I answered: "Really they are sisters" I turn to where she is and I introduce myself, "Excuse my bad manners, my name is Jesus and for me it is a pleasure to meet such a beauty". She smiles again and introduces herself, "Thank you and don't worry, my name is Maria" after that, within the hour I was talking to her, we both felt comfortable with each other's company.
After Monica's party, Maria and I kept communicating, we went out to eat, to the park, coffee shop among other places, the truth is that we liked to enjoy being together, we were like that for about 6 months, until in an outing I could not contain myself anymore and I told her that if she accepted to be my girlfriend, I remember that she told me that from the first moment we bumped into each other in that business, she did not stop thinking about me and of course she accepted. For me that day became the best day of my life.
A few months later we decided to take the next step (marriage), as we made the preparations, she told me that she had a dream of having a supermarket chain and the truth is that I had a small inheritance that my parents had left me, we had already set the date to get married and everything was ready, as the days and months passed, the long awaited date arrived. The day of the wedding I was at the church waiting for her to arrive in the car with her sister Monica and my friend Carlos, but instead of them arriving, my friend Jose came to the church with bad news, Maria, Monica and Carlos had an accident in the car and there are 2 dead, I ran to the hospital to try to get the news.
30 minutes after rushing out of the church to the hospital, heart racing hoping they were all ok, but when I arrive and ask the nurse in the care cubicle for information, He told me to go to the waiting room that the Doctor would soon come out to report, I waited and when about 1 hour had passed the Doctor arrived and that is when he informed us that Monica and Maria died and that Carlos fell into a coma, 1 month later he woke up from the coma.
I remember that day, I felt that my soul died, it was a hard moment for me, losing my girlfriend that I loved so much, I was submerged in a depression for about two years, I managed to get out because I remembered the dream that Maria had, so I decided to invest my inheritance in making real the dream of my beloved Maria, my supermarket chain is called: "Maria and Monica". In honor of my beloved Maria and her sister Monica, this is how I started my financial success.
Note: I thank @theinkwell, for this fiction contest and I thank all the people who take part of their time to read my stories. Thank you all.
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It was wonderful to think of Maria and Jesus running into each other repeatedly, until it was finally at a dinner party. What a beautiful love story, with a very hard end. It is nice that Jesus carried on Maria's dream with his inheritance, just like he planned to with her at his side. That is a stunning way to remember his love, and her sister. Thank you for sharing your story with us, and for your engagement with other members of the community.
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This is a great tale @pjpavan! I loved the tongue in cheek feeling of the "success story" it really summarizes the bitter feeling such a terrible tragedy must leave behind. It is sweet that Jesus found a way to still make some of their dreams come true at least, even if it was alone.
I wanted to give you a tip. Many authors find that it is beneficial to draft their posts in google documents. You have quite a few run-on sentences here, which takes away from an otherwise great story. Google docs will outline areas that need punctuation, which will really bring your tales together!
I hope that advice helps you along while you explore your love of writing. 😁 Thank you again for the great read, and I hope you have an awesome weekend!
This is a lovely story. You didn't allow the death of your loved one to hold you down completely. Those memories will always be cherished.
A sad one, but not completely sad as he was able to move on while still keep her dreams alive.
In a way Maria would've been proud of Jesus even in death