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RE: HER INHERITANCE - The Ink Well Prompt #48

in The Ink Well3 years ago

Nice story, this will be very good for movie. I feel bad for Maya, Carl failed as a man for listening to his dad's evil plan despite Maya's love for him. Lesson learnt.

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You are right.. But Carl was like a machine, always listening and doing whatever his father ask him to do. He should have considered Maya's love for him and spared her..

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