Lots of suspense and excitement in your story. I really liked how you narrated it and the thoughts of your protagonist.
The ending surprised me, I didn't imagine that everything would be a was a all a dream.
Saludos
Lots of suspense and excitement in your story. I really liked how you narrated it and the thoughts of your protagonist.
The ending surprised me, I didn't imagine that everything would be a was a all a dream.
Saludos
I know. I'm sorry.. next time, I won't allow it to end this way 🥺
But it was good. Don't worry I've learned that too.
I wish you a happy day 😊