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TEACHER
The evening was peaceful and mild. It is boring evening for me. I wanted to watch the UEFA champions league match that evening outside. I was enwrapt under the blanket wa hing aobie series on my television set. I slept off earlier and woke up at later about few minutes past 7pm. The match was slated for 7:45p.m. I was really tired and decided to chill at home.
However, Kelly my good friend gave me a call "Yo! bro, what's good pull up, lets have a nice time watching our team play!" he said. I was so reluctant and replied "My bro, I'm not feeling no vibes yh, what do you think" He kept persuading me and telling me to come out, I told him I was on my way.
Moreso, about 20 minutes later, i hearf a knock on the door and behold he wqs at my door step. I felt so surprised and I wore my oants and my hoodie and walked down the lit up streets of the city, it was a bee hive of activities, The barbecue man was at his best, the music was booming, the scent of pleasure and joy flooded the streets with a synergy of hood vibes, my night was already lit and booming. The boredom was gone afterall.
Furthermore, Kelly jeot me laighing with most of his rhymes and lines, he did various freestyle telling me how he ran the crib, he was realybgood with his rhymes, I nodded while vibing to his great artistic work. He ended up keeping me active again. I was happy to be with him there. We got to the soccer palace and it was lit and booming with activities. Football enthusiasts where already debating and analyzing their team performance ahead of the game at hand.
Interestingly, I sat down enjoying the environmental and believing that I was on for the best day of the my life. We watched yhw first half and the underdogs of the both teams whwre already winning the big game. I was happy to see tye disappointment written on Kelly's face and all other fans face. Most stood up and walked away this made me happy too. Trickles of rain started falling and more fans left the arena too. It was really interesting but started becoming boring too, so only a handful was left there too.
Importantly, I shrugged in discomfort few minutes later feeling awkward, a hunch kept trickling me to leave the arena, my instincts was sensing danger, I told kelly that I wanted to leave but he insisted we stayed a little more, It was not up to 15 minutes a team of heavily armed robbers raided the arena. I was shocked, we where all forced to lie faced down on the ground. I was fidgeting and looked at Kelly he gave me a mischievous grin. I was shrilled to the spine. He stood up adjusted his dreadlock and brought out his little pistol gun and ordered us to shut our eyes. We were pointed guns and robbed clean of our assets and mobile devices.
sourcerobbers tormented our souls and took our assets
Kelly walked sluggishly to me and snatched my iPhone 11pro max. I was given a soecial beating too to my very surprise. He git me in his hive and took advantage of my naiveness to exploit me. Conclusively, never trust no one, the friends you know can make or mar uou. Nwver be easily deceived by friends and I must say ue your brain, to reason befire taking hasty decisions. Never let anyone pressurize you into doing qhat you do not want to do.
Trusting someone cannot be a mistake. For someone to betray a friend must be the biggest mistake of human beings. Sad story, but unfortunately, true. Greetings
That's a real fact. You really studied my entry so well
Saddening you were betrayed by a friend you trusted.
I hope they were later caught
Funny enough I have not heard from Kelly again.
Hi @praizking. It's unfortunate what happened to you.
In our comment on your last post, we provided resources for improving your writing, including fixing errors. This story, again, is full of errors.
For example, in this screenshot of your last paragraph, we've highlighted the mistakes:
We will consider curating future posts if you take the time to produce quality work.
Thanks for keeping me in check
I liked your story. Kelly's attitude of inviting him to watch the football game, then stealing his phone and stealing from others present. Have a great night
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