The Haunted Soul [Fiction]

in The Ink Well2 years ago

sourcethe haunted soul must be dreaded, a real torment!

THE HAUNTED SOUL

It was a great summer filled with lots if eoisodes for the Johnson's as they loved each other so dearly as a family. There where lots of challenges they faced but they ended up sorting themselves out as a family.

However, Charles the first son of the Johnson's got admitted into college, he was so joy gilled and couldn't hide his excitement resuming on a new environment, away from home that had been his dream to leave his parents so he could be who he wanted to be. Charles resumed in college a couole of days later, with a broad smile, he couldn't help being cheerful, it was seen all around him. He met Kyla a young girl of about the same age with him. He met her in the library. She was so beautiful and she was all he coukd think about, he left his books too and kept on staring at her.

Furthermore, Charles swallowwd whenever she crossed his side, he was on her trail for about 2 days. He came up with a plan and when she walked passed him on an occasion, he set his legs and she stumbled into him, getting her attention he kept the stare for about some seconds as in the movies, smiles. Thwy got attracted to each other. The library became his home just to have a chat with kyla. If she was far from him, he would make sure he stole glances at her. This went on for sometime, their friendship grew so fast. She would always text him and call him all the time.

Moreso, Kyla got so interested in Charles, she also told him, one of the days that she loved him and he had a special gift that she wanted, he shrugged and perceived suspicious activity. He gave her a questionable look and that was when the haunt began. She confronted him henceforth asking him why he kept avoiding her, he wore a plastic smile and
lied to her, unknown to him she was a witch. She started tormenting him in bits. Charles called his parents that he wanted to change his college and this was because of the dreaded witch!
sourcethe witch haunted his miserable life

Additionally, she met him on another occasion and told him that he must stop playing games with her, he was rude to her while they talked and this made her yell and her eyes changed to that of an eagle, blood shot too. Charles shrugged and stumbled behind in terror. That night she appeared in his dream yelling at him, at that moment he started floating without touching him, she was a reall strong goddess and she insisted that she would keep keep disturbing him till she gets the gift he has. She invoked suicidal traits into his midset. He started getting the urge to kill himself.

sourcehe was haunted till he commited suicide

Importantly, the news got the notice of everyone that he slit his wrist and drowned inside the lake, his remains was taken to his hometown for his burial rites, the wicked goddess clicked her tonge, looking for the next prey. It is indeed a haunted soul who was a victim of such occurence. It remains a deadly story. I hope we enjoyed the piece, it is one of the best stories so afar. Regards @praizking

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Thank you for your positive remark.

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Pleasures are all mine my dear friend

this is terrible event for charles. imagine he is delightful for accepted in top university and got a girl he interested to and turn out she is a devil witch whose trying to bothered his life. poor him yet it's well written

Thank you so much for your beautiful contribution

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Again, welcome.

Thank you so much for your proper guidance to this regard I would be more cautious subsequently.

Poor Charles, he didn't deserve such a fate. How terrible must it be for his parents knowing Charles took his own life.

It is so painful my dear friend, thank you for stopping by too.

Poor Charles , great write
You can also look and subcribe to freewriters and see @zapfic.club and their contests , good luck see you around you got my vote and

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I would indeed check out the beautiful community. Kind regards once again my dear friend.