No problem, I think it made the story more interesting. I feel that writers often tell a bit too much or are to quick throwing words and conditions around and thus ruining things. Your descriptions, however, were perfect in showing that something was wrong with her.
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I truly appreciate this.
Yeah, I often like leaving readers with either suspense or making them hit their world of imagination as well.
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