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RE: Fiction: The portrait (El retrato) [EN/ES]

in The Ink Well5 months ago

The story masterfully captures the effervescence of love between Mike and Marisse, from their virtual encounter to the deepening of their relationship through shared moments and promises of a future together. The detailed description of their interactions reveals a palpable chemistry between the characters, especially during the art exhibition that marks a significant shift in Mike's perception of Marisse's world.

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Thank you for leaving such a meaningful comment, I am very glad that it caught you with each situation. You caught the essence of the story.

I wish you a week of much success and happiness.