Good narrative, engaging from the first words. The ending is superb, I expected him to lose his hand accidentally, but the way you expose it one would never expect it. Brilliant.
Good narrative, engaging from the first words. The ending is superb, I expected him to lose his hand accidentally, but the way you expose it one would never expect it. Brilliant.
Thank you very much, my friend. I thought of that in the first place, but I didn't want to make it look bad and violate the community rules, so I went with another, more fantastic method.
Thanks for reading me.