I like how you gradually build the tension. My emotions while reading this story were like a rollercoaster because it definitely made me feel a lot of things. I really felt the heavy emotions, and I was really surprised at how it ended. By the way, thanks for sharing such a wonderful story @mmeyenejoseph!
Good day.
Thank you so much for this review, I'm happy you could connect with all the emotions in this story.
And as the writer, I'm also glad Tunde could fulfill his dreams in the end. 😅