I really liked that dark touch you gave to the first ending. The suspense is up in the air, if the wolf wanted to hurt him or not.
Interesting story, thanks for sharing.
Good day.
I really liked that dark touch you gave to the first ending. The suspense is up in the air, if the wolf wanted to hurt him or not.
Interesting story, thanks for sharing.
Good day.
I'm glad you found that suspenseful aspect of the first ending effective. You make a good point about the suspense created by the ambiguity in the first ending, where it's unclear if the wolf intends to harm Emily or not before she strikes it down. Leaving that unanswered definitely adds a darker, more ominous touch. The tension of the moment is heightened by not knowing the wolf's true motives. Thank you so much for reading and stopping by.