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RE: The Ink Well Prompt #19: The Company We Steep

in The Ink Well4 years ago

I absolutely adore this story. It's begging to be a full novel. Your characters are so realistic and beautifully detailed. Your descriptions are so vivid that I can really see everything in full detail. You also touched on a global truth. Those who bully are typically bullied themselves. It's an unfortunate taught behavior. Mena's understanding is amazing. We need more people like her in the world. You did a fantastic job!

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Ooh, the adventures of Philomena and Bertie would definitely be fun to write, who knows what sort of mischief those two would get into, not to mention the drag races lol!

I often wonder about living in a world with more Mena's, people who can see the pain behind the bad behavior and flip situations towards an unexpected better.

Thank you so much for the kind words and encouragement, I'm so, so pleased you enjoyed the tale:)!