Ah, that IS a killer last line! Wraps everything up beautifully. A really fun 'motor' story and congrats on your well deserved win! I love the line about the eyes as windows and the beach being your love yard. Some great turns of phrase here!
Ah, that IS a killer last line! Wraps everything up beautifully. A really fun 'motor' story and congrats on your well deserved win! I love the line about the eyes as windows and the beach being your love yard. Some great turns of phrase here!
Thank you so much for your beautiful feedback. It is heartwarming.