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RE: The Good Girl

in The Ink Well3 years ago

otherwise been a very difficult read for my persona to enjoy

Now that's a compliment! I wanted to make her more interesting than a murderer of her father and whilst I accidentally broke the community rules about violence, this wasn't a story ABOUT violence, it was a story about being understood and heard. So the outcome would be whether they truly heard her or not, and given the town seemed to protect a man that committed violence, I'm not sure they'd support her, especially as her MANNER isn't particularly likeable. I think they'd focus more on how she is unconventional, aloof and spirited, and hang her for that rather than truly empathising.

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