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RE: The shadow behind the sin.

in The Ink Well2 years ago

The theme is not common. I like how you have connected the three different stories and made them into one. I was not prepared for the moral of the story to be like this instead, I thought of some supernatural interjection but I am very happy and pleased with the way you designed it.

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Thank you very much for your comment. I thought at first that the ending would be something supernatural, but then re-reading what I had written, I liked more that final message where fears must be faced and left behind. I'm glad you liked it.
Regards @ sadfish

The choice you made surely changed the entire perspective of the story.

Thank you @ sadfish for reading and commenting on my story.
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