INKWELL POETRY CHALLENGE/ BACK IN MEMORY LANE

in The Ink Well4 years ago (edited)

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BACK IN MEMORY LANE

With a nervous feeling and weak bones
I stepped into the mirage of uncertainty
Still in the space full of mystery
I still wonder in perplexity

I wander in the cold thick forest
Like a being who has courage
But my nervous being is self revealing
Even nature understood my plight

Drown with the thought of an awful life
With my mind and soul going different ways
My nervous mind control me to a pasture
There I found rest

Bringing back old memories
My weak old self coming back to existence
My nervous system could not comprehend
Showing my feeble hands cannot war.


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This is good stuff, think there is an error in the third line of your first verse though. Well done. Cheers!

So frightening a memory