Oh, my... I love a good ending. This one had a nice punch to it, even more so because the story comes full circle to something that seemed unrelated until later. But when you know, you know... and I knew the fly was important to the story, or you would never have mentioned it. Every word matters, right? Beautiful character arc in this one AG. Loved it! 💗💗💗
You were so right. It was about the fly before I ever wrote anything. Very astute of you.
Thanks so much for the kind review. I had fun writing this...isn't that the point?