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RE: Inkwell Prompt #162: You Only Live Once

in The Ink Well6 months ago

There is no promise in this life that our load will be light. And if we don't reject the constant temptations that plague the mind, that burden will feel all the more heavy. We don't always appreciate that the consequences of our actions have a ripple effect that touches more people than we might ever know, so it's important to take a beat before rushing in blindly. When we come forth in humility, with love and compassion, we start to see things through different eyes and gain an understanding of the one thing that is truly important. Only then can we be set free. Your story puts every reader beside the Subject, at that juncture; causing us to consider: What would I choose? and How will I ensure that my load is light, both for me and for others to bear? You show us that when we are putting our best foot forward at the outset, it no longer matters what strikes may befall us.

So nice to see you writing fiction, @agmoore ! I thoroughly enjoyed this read.

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Sorry for the last response, dear @samsmith1971. Dealing with a real-life issue last night. Another brother in the hospital. Your words ring true at the moment.

There is no promise in this life that our load will be light

What's going on now in my family is quite ordinary, but when it happens to us it feels extraordinary. We have to meet circumstances and buck up no matter what comes our way.

Thanks very much for your thoughtful response and kind comment.

I pray your brother is ok, @agmoore I'm so sorry that you are experiencing so much in such a short space of time. Sending you lots of love 💗

 5 months ago  

I send you and your family prayers and hope your brothers Godspeed. Take care.