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RE: A Murmuring of Starlings

in The Ink Well3 months ago

Thank you for your kind and considered feedback, my lovely. Your words are very encouraging to me. It makes me feel that I am at least on the right path!

Until it feels 'right' it's not done.

👆 THIS!

Although, I understand what your son was saying. I have been told on several occasions that I should not seek to be such a perfectionist with my pieces. That it is better to write regularly and keep hitting the publish button. I struggle with that so much! Some nights I open my laptop and simply reread what I wrote the few days before and apply another edit. I may do a partial rewrite with fresh eyes. The story may not progress in terms of plot, but it progresses in terms of tightening the narrative, adding foreshadowing, doing more research, etc. I always edit as I go. It's just my process lol. I think I enjoy the research and editing aspects as much as the initial write 😂

Thank you for taking the time to read my story. I appreciate you 💗💗

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I think I enjoy the research and editing aspects as much as the initial write

Absolutely. For me, the first write is a draft. The rest of it, the editing, is when the story is carved into shape. It is the editing where the subtlety of expression, my voice, resides. This is my argument against AI. I don't want it deciding the very best way to say what I want to say.

So, I agree with your process, it's just that I don't have the patience to work on a long piece anymore. I envy you that. Also, I have become so fond of economy that I cut, cut, cut until my stories are down to bare nubs :)))