This story was so well conceived, D. Clever! The idea, hook, structure, balance, character development, and delivery of the arc... it was gripping and it delivered!!! It pulled at the heartstrings, and truth be told, it has left me feeling so sad for both Elise and Mach :-( What hits so hard is that this is so possible! And one of them had to make the only decision that could be made. Heartbreaking. They lose each other twice in a lifetime :-( I think my world would fall apart. So many conflicting emotions in one go! Finding her son, losing her husband... and then her son again... I can't actually get my head around the emotions. You did a wonderful job of getting inside Elise's head and heart and bringing her story alive.
Thank you... This was a wonderful and stirring read. !LUV !LADY
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