Mat! This is fabulous. I love how you explored her vulnerability and low self-esteem issues using a female voice. And then you provided a connection with an unlikely new classmate who may himself just be a misunderstood young outcast. It seems that they may be about to save each other from themselves. You should have used this creative commons wiki link for the pic to make it perfectly clear that you had the rights to use the image although most WIKI images are free to use outside of WIKI. If you simply click on the photo in wiki it takes you to the source page of the photo in wiki and shows the photographers name and creative commons licence. !PIZZA !ALIVE !LUV
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Thank you as always, for the lovely comment... yes, it may be a start of a really strong bond between the two of them, I probably should consider making another portion of the story in the future.
Thank you, very for taking this to my attention, I will rectify it as soon as possible.