your writing is truly remarkable. The way you captured Emma's inner turmoil as she realizes she's about to marry an unwilling candidate is palpable. Even though her maid of honor doesn't explicitly say it, Emma senses that something is off. The scene in the bell tower is a stroke of genius, and the idea of being saved by the man who has been dreaming of her is both romantic and thrilling. Your writing is engaging, and I found myself fully invested in the story from start to finish. Well done!
Thank you, you are very kind. I like to have that effect on the readers, it makes me realize that my work is improving. I send you my best vibes.