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Task 1
There are many elements that describe the atmosphere but none of them made me aware of the character's hopes or fears. I felt that something was missing from the story, no doubt the description of the environment is defined.
Task 2
A beautiful story of repressed love, however I did not find elements that would tell me what the atmosphere was, or if it was several atmospheres.
I enjoyed the final story, I'm not an expert in literature or anything like that, I just like to read. I hope that my advice is taken in the best way, it is my personal opinion and I expect the same when I make my productions, a feedback that invites me to improve.
Greetings 🙋🏽 @kaerpediem
All feedback are welcome :D
In fact, I would like to know how others relate to the stories ...
Thanks for your comment and engagement, @soyunasantacruz.
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Thank you very much, it has been a pleasure.