Oh man, what a story. Best short story I've read lately. I really like that you have introduced all the elements of fiction that are necessary through your storytelling. You gave names to everything and everybody, wrote poems. Fantastic from start to finish. The talent you possess is fascinating.
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Thanks dude, I appreciate your feedback and I'm glad you enjoyed this tale of mystery and magic 🙂
I am in the middle of writing a fantasy novel, and hope to get it finished sooner rather than later. Perhaps one day I'll be able to announce its publication and availability in shops on steem 😂🙂