Wow, very dark! Really good! 😁
I think Greg learned a valuable lesson here; if it seems to good to be true, it probably is!
I admire the way you got a fully coherent story in here with a great twist, but you didn't let the word count spiral out of control, something I think will take a LONG time for me to master! 😁
I trend to the opposite. I struggle to write more than 500 words. Haha. Odd lot aren’t we? 🤗