That is great. Has the feel of an old fashioned fairy tale.
For me the telling is a little distancing, but it wouldn't take much to make it more immediate and immersive.
That is great. Has the feel of an old fashioned fairy tale.
For me the telling is a little distancing, but it wouldn't take much to make it more immediate and immersive.
I appreciate the time you allotted for reading and commenting on my story.