There is some terrific world building here. Very much enjoyed it.
For me there could be a little trimming done to take out unnecessary exposition and author insertion.
There is some terrific world building here. Very much enjoyed it.
For me there could be a little trimming done to take out unnecessary exposition and author insertion.
Thank you so much.
I'm not very aware of author insertion. I'll look it up and see how it can help my writing.