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Thanks for posting this dramatic story @theinkwell, @supo1

Thanks for supporting the community with your comments to the other writers.

It seems Fred really moved on, not even wanting to be a father to his children!

We often provide feedback to writers who are just getting started. The Ink Well has some great resources in our catalog of fiction writing tips. For example, we have tips on developing characters in your stories, and integrating action, dialog and narrative. These resources can help you learn how to write more developed stories that include the important elements of fiction.

Keep writing!

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