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RE: The R.S.V.P Worth a Thousand Words (Ink Well Prompt #119)

in The Ink Well2 years ago

The conversation between Kelly and Brianne is like one I always have with my best friend. Even when I feel her opinions aren't needed somehow, I still want to hear her thoughts and validate them in my mind. Haha. I'm actually curious what her desires are; is it to be with Jake or continue with her wedding? Because it feels like she hasn't gotten over Jake and it'll hurt so bad if she goes on with the marriage and lives with him in a facade as if she truly loves him when really she's seeing the face of someone else.

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Thank you ( • ᴗ - ) ✧ The desire was to be with Jake and not go through with the wedding (I think I made the ending too subtle ).

think I made the ending too subtle ).

Yep! You did but anyways it made the story interesting and paved a path for critical reasoning.