"Beyond the goodbye"

in The Ink Well4 months ago (edited)

"Some goodbyes happen too fast, leaving us replaying moments, looking for things we missed."

It was Thursday morning, the August rain started as a light drizzle, the one that does make the world looks as if it was wrapped in a glass. Tizzy and I stood under a mango tree, gisting and laughing over silly things, making jest of lovers who refer to a drizzling weather as "weather for two."

That morning, after a long time spent together, Tizzy starred at me like a stranger, with tears in his eyes and said to me with a heavy heart, "how I wish I stayed with you here forever. How I wish time permits us to continue seeing each other till death sets us apart." Hmmm! If I had known it was his last goodbye, I might have held him back. I might have held him under the mango tree where we stood for long, or forced him to pass a night with me or stopped him from going or anything.

Kai! The only thing I said to him was, "okay bro, take care! I'll miss you." I said this pulling him into a quick hug. "Catch you somedays." His gazes held mine a moment longer than usual, and he smiled, a soft and reluctant smile. " Till we meet again," he said, with a laugh, light and strange again as if he knew something I did not know.

I watched him took his bike and threw his last wave at me. I went home unaware of how much that goodbye would haunt me.

Moments later, I received a call from an unknown number. Guess what! Boom! I heard "your friend Tizzy has been crushed to death in a ghastly accident on his way. The rest was blur. I found myself standing on a cold isle, empty and stretched. I replayed his last goodbye and wave he threw at me and I broke into tears. I recalled how he was a caring, defensive, and selfless friend. I thought of how we both planned to become the next world best content creators (comedy). Infact, tears took over other thoughts. But there was nothing I can do. I knew he was gone and gone forever. Tizzy, my beloved friend, I believe there's a place beyond this planet where friends reunite. And if there be as I believe, we shall meet again to part no more.

Goodbye once again, Tizzy!

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This was an everlasting goodbye. This is s good story and well-constructed, but did not get to theinwell standard. You would have made it up to 750 words. Just try to go through their rules.

Goodbye Tizzy,
Boss make it 750.
Smiles