Your piece is nicely balanced as regards dialogue, narrative, and action and we can see your efforts at a creative response to the prompt. Your story, however, has no real character arc. Nobody learns or grows in this piece, and as a result it is hard to feel invested in any of the outcomes. Your story also needs more development and some work on grammar and word selection. Please take a look at this Ink Well article below on creating memorable characters.
I will take note of that. I'm grateful that I'm coming up gradually