This is a lovely Christmas romance. You begin well
Going by the look of things, a holiday is just a way to get some special, unforgettable memories. Memories that would last forever.
Boland is purely a home far from home. Although Boland is my city and my home town, it is far from where we lived.
The theme of the story is established and we are introduced to the marvelous Boland. When Ani is first mentioned, her image is consistent with Dave's expectations of Boland.
In the middle of the piece, there is a crisis--this is essential to a well-crafted story. But, the couple's relationship survives the crisis, and the story ends on a high note. This is a satisfying resolution.
What you have created in the story is a very good arc.
Thank you for sharing the story with us, @abigail04.
Thanks a lot