Your story is interesting, but short! We are left wondering about his past, what led him to be alone for three years, and why the mysterious horse followed him and disappeared. You have a nice gift for writing! We just wish for enough details to understand the main character's plight.
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The plot is ...He stinks ...moral of the story : dont stink
Thank you for the valuable feedback. I admit that the mystery captivated me in the story, and I ended up following that path.