Readers can recognize the challenge of being an overly protected child and then having to meet the demands of the world without that protection. Mike went through some hard experiences in his first year, but they were necessary for him to develop independence. You do a good job of explaining Mike's challenge. We see the development of his character clearly. Also, you offer a good story arc with a satisfying resolution.
Thank you for sharing this with us, @alovely.
Waw. You're very right. Thanks for reading and rewarding my effort.