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RE: Return At Last

in The Ink Welllast year

The king’s son returned in the nick of time to avert the curse.
You’re world-building is imaginative and you’ve presented us with vivid characters. However, you should use a grammar checker to help eliminate the errors that mar your text.

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@theinkwell, thanks a lot for stopping by to read my story. Also your corrections are well noted.