You have a nice approach toward Jane's 'discovery'. Describing her understanding of the budding romance as reminding her of her parents is clever. You manage to blend her lack of experience with dawning awareness.
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RE: Misunderstanding and Closure
You have a nice approach toward Jane's 'discovery'. Describing her understanding of the budding romance as reminding her of her parents is clever. You manage to blend her lack of experience with dawning awareness.