This is a very compelling and readable story, @ayane-chan. The mystery keeps the story moving, and we must read to the end to find out what's really going on. It is resolved well, and in a way that let's us know the old woman on the path was no ordinary woman. Well done!
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Thanks for letting me know. I'll keep that interval in mind when posting.