Hello @ayin, you write an interesting story about some social struggles by a disabled man. Lucky he has some good friends and found a good woman to marry eventually.
Have you considered Google Docs for example to draft your stories? It's a great way to find and fix grammar and mistakes in the text, which it highlights and you can fix them by clicking on them.
This would help you improve your writing!
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