This was a very unusual take on the I miss you prompt, Balikis95. The opening hook was fantastic and well-written. Aspects of the story which followed, however, appeared underdeveloped and a bit disjointed. It felt like there were multiple themes that didn't quite tie up. Perhaps too many ideas thrown into a restrictive word count? I so desperately wanted you to continue with the story in the same vein in which you had started: good pacing, care and diligence over word choices and sentence construction. Something to consider is that there was no foreshadowing of her parents' death. As a result the prompt felt a bit like an afterthought.
Again, that opening paragraph was fantastic!
Thank you for writing in The Ink well. We look forward to more of your stories.
Thank you for stopping by and for your kind words. Maybe there were different ideas setting in a restricted word counts. I will do better next time.
Thank you once again.