Your story has a catchy intro which grabs the reader's attention, and you followed through with good character development.
“Is it a crime to birth twins?”
You have to empathise with the parents and understand the emotions felt by the mum, although they were just being kids. It's great the way they took ownership in the end and acted responsibly by taking directives on board.
This was a great effort for our prompt. Thank you for getting involved:)
Thanks for an amazing topic and truly, one that has to emphasise with parents as taking care of kids is not a joke, especially twins... Gosh!!! They are most times unbearable.
Thanks for reading through and for your comment.