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RE: A visit to Grandma's home

in The Ink Well7 days ago

A thoughtful reminiscent piece @beauty197. It is clear that your grandma meant a lot to you. You show us a fiercely independent lady who aged gracefully, loved fully, cooked up a storm, and prided herself on keeping a beautiful, and organised home. Your piece would have benefited from an edit. You run one idea into the next, using commas where period would be more appropriate. In The Ink Well we expect our writers to submit good quality stories. If editing is lacking, curation will be lower than it could have been. Thank you for sharing your story in The Ink Well community.

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Thank you for the correction @theinkwell