You do a good job in describing the conflict and resolution in this piece. Great title. However, there are minor, avoidable errors that take from the quality of your work. This, for example:" aa students were seen in groups gisting about their holiday plans or planning their get up for the ceremony".
If you proofread your pieces more carefully, they will be more polished. Thank you for sharing this experience with us, @beckyroyal.
Thanks for the observation. Hoping to get better in my writing.