You lace a deep feeling of foreboding far before the pitter patter of tiny paws appear, leading us to question if perhaps something otherworldly is occurring. As this feeling surges and a proper defense is sought after, we worry this story will cross our stance on violence... Then we are relived as we see all is well.
However, in your resolution we find that the initial goal to cleanse and recenter has been somewhat lost. It would have been nice to see some of the thematic verbiage from early on implemented in the ending. Does the realization of safety change the view of the cards, or at least bring some peace?
A cliff hanger is also impactful, and one could make the argument that the resolution is meant to feel that way. There is certainly a lot of heart in this story, which carries us along with stark signs and the jitters of panic. A very well written tale, thank you for sharing it with us!
Thank you for your honest opinion. I really needed that and I think this is the same point I always am lack of. I am working on it.
Thank you for your support. And thank you for this community because writing is a healer for me. I can do it by Inkwell freely and get a honest opinion about it. 🖤
Yes, the honest review of my work is one of the things I've always loved about the Inkwell :) They've helped me so much with my writing :)
And inkwell is doing it so politely. I really love that.
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They're here to help, not judge :) I hope you will keep asking for help, as we should all strive to improve each time we write :)
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In terms of learning to write, I am exactly like a 3 year old. 😂 I always ask "What is this?", "What is that?" So I don't think my questions will ever end. 😂
Thank you again and again for your kindness and support.💫
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