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RE: Last Hope.

in The Ink Well2 years ago

Your story has a great conflict and a strong story arc. Well, done, @bornben! It seemed like Marvin was headed down the wrong road by trying to memorize answers instead of learning the material. This probably goes on in schools all the time.

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