Hi @brandt. Thanks for posting in The Ink Well. As a piece of fiction this has some interesting qualities. You've taken life experience and pictures from your travels and crafted a story with a disoriented narrator, skeletal remains and a sense of doom. It's unusual, but a fun read. Hopefully with your next story you will bring us characters and a bit more plot. :-)
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Hey, thanks for the support! And I very much appreciate your feedback :) Yeah, perhaps my plot was a bit skeletal… but I'm sure you saw that there were multiple characters involved ;)