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RE: Being A Lion

in The Ink Well2 years ago

Thank you for this brief visit to the world that exists between life and something else. The spirit of the sick boy inhabited the soul of a lion, but it did not belong there. The magic in your story is entrancing. This is not a dream. This is not a death. This is an experience that is beyond reason or human understanding. And yet, you make it believable.

Your hook is great, as is your use of the prompt. Thank you for sharing this story with us, @buezor. We appreciate that you engage with other members of the community.