This story about love and happiness has a happy ending. You trace the life journey of Bianca through hope, hard work and finally success. Readers understand Bianca's motivation as a character because you explain it clearly.
Since this seems to be a birthday story (in response to the prompt) it would be a good idea for you to link it as a comment under the prompt.
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