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RE: Nurse Ozichukwu

in The Ink Well2 years ago

You have all the elements of a strong story here, @cool08. There is the joy that comes from raising a child. The tragedy of loss and Mrs. Ojo's death. There is the happiness of rediscovery. That is a great arc.

You also have your brilliant, memorable character. Thank you for sharing this story with us, and for engaging with other authors in the community.