Your writing has shown some remarkable improvement recently, @cool08. This is a well-developed story with interesting characters, a good story arc, and few errors. (What's your secret?? 😀)
Thank you for sharing your story in The Ink Well, and for reading and commenting on the work of other community members.
I habe been gkong through so many articles and have seen some of the mistakes I do make. This is why I had to improve.